scribble scrabble

By david On April 7th, 2004

hello m’dear,
can’t you see how clear it is?
not to sound mean,
but it’s pretty plain and simple.

so why don’t you take a break,
sit back and think about it.
cause then maybe you’ll make
sense to yourself;
you don’t deceive me,
i know there’s something wrong.

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2 Responses to “scribble scrabble”

  1. meg Says: April 7th, 2004 at 6:37 pm

    i like this very much

    :)

  2. SarahJane Says: April 8th, 2004 at 10:34 pm

    I love that first line; it’s a great hook, even though I can’t tell you just what it is about it that grabs. I like the whole thing, too.

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